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Thursday, 22 October 2015

Poetry about the sun



Today my class had to write a poem about the sun. We had to add in a simile, metaphor, adjectives and verbs. Here is a picture of what my poem looks like.

4 comments:

  1. Hi I like the way you really used interesting words and how you thought of which words are more stronger than some words, Next time try to find more stronger words than the words you used now.
    :D Alone

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  2. Hi me kanye i like the way you described about the sun and put in really good smiles. (^0^)

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  3. Hi Cerenity i like the way you done a amazing poem.I really like you similes.

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