Tornado - Poetry!

Tornadoes - Poetry:

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IALT: Reflect about my Poetry reflection

Today I have just finished my poem about Tornadoes. A lot of people decided to make there one rhyme but I decided not to. Here is my poem that I wrote:

The Terrifying Cloud:

I awaken from a deep sleep with the sounds of terror. The rain cried with extreme thunder and lightning appearing from the night sky, as the moon and the stars danced away. I was in a horror movie.

I tip toe to my window and the sounds get closer and closer,

The hard wind knocks on my window with a big BANG! I glanced at the window like a statue.

The wind gets harder and BANGS on the window again, I quickly run outside. A MASSIVE cloud appears out of the blue, everyone runs the other direction.

“TORNADO!” Yell’s everyone...

The Tornado span around like a merry-go-round.

It whirled, twirled, twisted and curled toward me. Picking up everything like a vacuum cleaner.

I am anxiously terrified,

Shivers in my body like i’m in a tub of ice.

I’m running from side to side as it constantly carries on. Am I dreaming?

In a few hours it is finished. Houses, cars and cities are destroyed. My everything has vanished.

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I really enjoyed writing this poem about Tornadoes because I got to express my feelings in this poem! One thing that I didn't enjoy was that I tried to my it rhyme but then I decided not to because it was kind of hard. One thing I have learnt is to put my punctuation in the correct place.

QUESTION: If you got to write a poem about a natural disaster, what natural disaster would it be and why?

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MANY THANKS